I love this. These need to be read to people while showing the image on a screen. I think this is a magical style of poetry. Is it a style? What is it? A technique? A cheat? It's a magical one, then.
I thought I was doing erasure. I had no inkling of the history of The Humument (or "The Hum–––––ument") until now. Thanks Rosie! Thanks NaPoWriMo!
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